Revise each of the following sentences to put readers in them. As you revise, use active voice and simple words.
1. Mutual funds can be purchased from banks, brokers, financial planners, or from the fund itself.
2. I would like to take this opportunity to invite you back to Global Wireless. As a previous customer we have outstanding new rate plans to offer you and your family. We invite you to review the rate plans on the attached page and choose the one that best fits your needs. All our customers are important to us.
3. Another aspect of the university is campus life, with an assortment of activities and student groups to participate in and lectures and sports events to attend.

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