Microsoft shared with Business Insider the template of the goodwill letter it sends to new parents, or, more precisely, to their babies.

Your Task. 

Evaluate the strengths and weaknesses of this message—in writing if your instructor assigns a written analysis.

Transcribed Image Text:

Date Dear [Name], While you've been busy getting ready for the world, we've been busy doing our part to get the world ready for you. You represent the most important thing we've all been working toward-the future. Enclosed are some special gifts we selected just for you. The Welcome Baby Box is lovingly put together by AtWork!, a non- profit organization whose mission is to help people with disabilities be productive, integrated, and contributing members of their communities. One of our favorite gifts is the Nanny and Webster blanket. Not only will this blanket keep you warm, but also, all profits from Nanny and Webster blankets support children's charities. Please be sure to share these gifts with your parents. Ask your parents to familiarize themselves with the great benefits that Microsoft offers, like Back-Up Care, subsidized child care, new mothers' rooms, and family resources from the Microsoft CARES Employee Assistance Program. All can be found under Work & Life-Children & Family on benefits.me.microsoft.com. We look forward to watching you grow and seeing what you'll achieve. Sincerely, Fred Thiele GM, Global Benefits