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Now that our stores have been re-organized with your hard work and cooperation, we hope revenues will rise to new heights; if we reemphasize equipment sales as Stereo City core business and reduce the visibility of our sideline retail products. Just in case though, we want to be certain that these changes are having the positive affect on our cash flow that we all except and look forward to.
To help us make that determination, respond to the attached survey. Answer concisely; but use the extra blank answer field at the end of the survey if necessary—for details and explanations.
When you finish the survey it will help headquarters improve service to you; but also, help us all improve service to our customers. Complete the survey before May 15. Then Stereo city hopefully can thrive in a marketplace, that critics say we cannot conquer. Stereo City must choose wisely and serve it’s customers well in a difficult retail business environment.
Times are very tough but if we work hard at it its possible we might make Stereo City’s ‘the man on the streets’ favorite ‘place to go to purchase audio equipment!
Cheers, Tom Dooley, vice pres. real estate

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[Subject line]: Recent Cash Flow and consumer response-Survey All ---