Correct the following business messages keeping the 7C's of effective communication in consideration.

1. Revise the following message for conciseness:

At this time of the day, we are sending this announcement to let everyone know that new medicines ordered by the hospital which are mentioned on the list will be available from next month.

2. Revise the following message for correctness:

Careem has recently launched their service for ‘Wedding Celebrations’ the brand manager was asked to write an e-mail to offer discounted packages and inform of the hospitality it is about to set for. However, the drafted e-mail had a lot of errors. Here’s the sample e-mail content for you:

Dear Customers

We are very upset about launching a wen project for your needs that are endless we at careers not ready to lunch our services for wedding packages but is ready to occupy space for celebrations we would like you to uses our news services and be happiest always.

Best

Careem

3. Rewrite the following message with tact and courtesy:

Sarim,

I wanted to let you know that I don’t appreciate how your team always monopolizes the discussion at our weekly meetings. I have a lot of projects, and I really need time to get my team’s progress discussed as well! So far, thanks to your department, I haven’t been able to do that. Can you make sure they make time for me and my team next week?

Thanks,

Hassan

 Rubrics for error correction answer:

1. All relevant and meaningful answers will be accepted. 
2. Answers should be informal and accurate language.
3. Only the correct application of 7Cs will be acceptable.

Answer rating: 100% (QA)

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