Read the sentence. I told them how surprised and excited I was to have my painting...

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Read the sentence. I told them how surprised and excited I was to have my painting selected, especially since I'd felt so incompetent at the beginning and I knew the competition was so ruthless. Which revision best uses dialogue to improve the sentence? "Yup, it was a big surprise," I told them. "I'm excitec that my painting was selected! Especially since I fel so incompetent at the beginning and the competition was so ruthless." "Honestly, I was surprised," I told them truthfully. "The competition was ruthless, and I felt incompeten at the beginning. It's really exciting to have my painting selected!" "I'm in! My painting is in! I feel a fist pump and a little dance coming on," I said, grinning. I thought about how I felt so incompetent at the beginning because of the ruthless competition. "Did you hear?" I asked them. "My painting got selected! Exciting, right?" I smiled. "Especially given that I felt so incompetent at the beginning and that Read the sentence. I told them how surprised and excited I was to have my painting selected, especially since I'd felt so incompetent at the beginning and I knew the competition was so ruthless. Which revision best uses dialogue to improve the sentence? "Yup, it was a big surprise," I told them. "I'm excitec that my painting was selected! Especially since I fel so incompetent at the beginning and the competition was so ruthless." "Honestly, I was surprised," I told them truthfully. "The competition was ruthless, and I felt incompeten at the beginning. It's really exciting to have my painting selected!" "I'm in! My painting is in! I feel a fist pump and a little dance coming on," I said, grinning. I thought about how I felt so incompetent at the beginning because of the ruthless competition. "Did you hear?" I asked them. "My painting got selected! Exciting, right?" I smiled. "Especially given that I felt so incompetent at the beginning and that Read the sentence. I told them how surprised and excited I was to have my painting selected, especially since I'd felt so incompetent at the beginning and I knew the competition was so ruthless. Which revision best uses dialogue to improve the sentence? "Yup, it was a big surprise," I told them. "I'm excitec that my painting was selected! Especially since I fel so incompetent at the beginning and the competition was so ruthless." "Honestly, I was surprised," I told them truthfully. "The competition was ruthless, and I felt incompeten at the beginning. It's really exciting to have my painting selected!" "I'm in! My painting is in! I feel a fist pump and a little dance coming on," I said, grinning. I thought about how I felt so incompetent at the beginning because of the ruthless competition. "Did you hear?" I asked them. "My painting got selected! Exciting, right?" I smiled. "Especially given that I felt so incompetent at the beginning and that

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