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Review the Rules of Narrative Writing and apply them to the report below. The report you see below has many errors and violations of good narrative writing so don't be shy in making changes. Once you have made a list of the Rules of Narrative Writing that have been violated, rewrite the report following the rules.

Additional information for you is that your backup officer is Jeff Guidry. You seized the rifle and booked it for safekeeping. An FI is cop talk for Field Interview, a casual encoun documented on a small card for historical purposes. Details: On 6-2-15, at approx. 2245 hrs. I discovered a subject, (Bayes, Harold Lee, 3-3-69, Driver Lic. of B27346, 590 Gilmar, duncanville, 735-2848) asleep in a vehicle parked in the parking lot W/of Palo Verde and S/of Spring. The vehicle was a Toyota, 2002, Tan 4 X 4 pick-up w/camper shell, lic # 33R162L. I could see the wooden stock and blue receiver of a rifle lying next to him.

After getting follow up officer at the scene I was able to get the subject Bayes out of the vehicle. He said that he had recently been kicked out of his residence and had come to the park to jog but fell asleep afterwards inside his vehicle. He said that the rifle was just part of his property which he'd taken with him and had no other reason for placing the rifle next to him. the weapon, (Remington, M-740, 30.6, SER # 3822162) was seized from the vehicle and found to have (1) expended cartridge in the chamber. No other ammunition was found. An attempt was made to have Duncanville PD check his residence however they were too busy at the time. They did go by the residence later and were unable to contact anyone. (They also advised that they's been out to Subject Bayes residence last night on a call of an attempted suicide where Bayes was the victim/suspect. It is unknown if my contact was related.) Bayes was F.I.'d and released at the scene. His rifle was seized and booked at El fuego PD Property Room for safekeeping.