Revise the following sentences to be more appropriate for inclusion within a formal report.

a. I think the data analysis shows increased customer satisfaction with our new procedures for returns and exchanges.

b. The mail survey response rate was fantastic.

c. The phone surveys were conducted over a two-day period and were ready to be analyzed.

d. I agree with the findings of the office of institutional advancement that more attention should be given to alumni involvement.

e. All of the corporate benefits are competitive with other similar companies. All of the corporate salaries are competitive with similar companies.

f. In my opinion, the sales team did not meet all of their quarterly goals because there was a decline in consumer spending.

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