Rewrite the following email to use active voice, formal rather than colloquial words, inclusive language, common words, and concision. Note that your revision of the email will be better organized, more precisely worded, and shorter than the original.

To all employees of our company Pet Bin, It has come to our attention that our efforts to reorganize the dog treats section of the bins in aisle 2 have been thwarted by well-meaning staff who have brought their personal opinions to our organizing system. People have good ideas, but they aren't following the store protocols. The idea of putting large dog bones on the bottom shelf is that they are heavier than the other dog treats, so we were worried that should they fall, they may injure a customer. But these were placed too high on the highest shelf by a staff member. He isn't considering that the shorter workers and customers can't reach that high. Also, an additional concern is that we have several bins of free promotional treats, and these shouldn't take centre stage because they are freebies, and our purpose is to sell to people, so these should be placed to the side. Some staff member has also been hiding Greenies because he thinks these are unhealthy for dogs, but it's not our place to be moral about the issue. In fact, there are probably many unhealthy things in our store, but like grocery stores for humans, shopping permits freedom of choice for customers.

So, in conclusion, please review the directions in the attachment on how to organize the canine lupis familiar is section of our store.

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Subject Revised Guidelines for Organizing the Dog Treats Section Dear Pet Bin Team I hope this messa... View the full answer