We are sorry to disappoint you, but our nine-day boat excursion to the Galpagos Islands has filled

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We are sorry to disappoint you, but our nine-day boat excursion to the Galápagos Islands has filled up quickly and is now fully booked. We can place you on a wait list that would make you only the second in line.

Revise the above sentence so that the bad news is de-emphasized in a dependent clause that precedes an independent clause.

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Essentials Of Business Communication

ISBN: 9780357714973

12th Edition

Authors: Mary Ellen Guffey, Dana Loewy

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