Your roommate is about to submit a scope statement for a spring concert sponsored by the entertainment council at the University of Queensland (UQ). UQ has over 32000 undergraduate students and 11000 postgraduate students. This will be the first time in a number of years that $\cup Q$ has sponsored a spring concert. The entertainment council has budgeted $\$ 40000$ for the project. The event is to occur on 5 September. Since your roommate knows you are taking a class on project management, they have asked you to review their scope statement and make suggestions for potential improvements. They consider the concert to be a resume-building opportunity for them and therefore want to be as professional as possible. Below is the draft of the scope statement they have prepared to-date. What suggestions would you make about the draft's contents, and why?