Imagine you just received an e-mail message from a friend. The message reads, “Just wanted to tell you that I just finished writing my business plan. I’m very proud of it. It’s very comprehensive and is just over 100 pages. The executive summary alone is 9 pages. I plan to start sending it out to potential investors next week. Do you have any words of advice for me before I start sending it out? Be honest—I really want to get funding.” How would you respond to your friend’s request for feedback?