Revise the following sentences to emphasize the perspective of the audience and the you view. To avoid
Question:
Revise the following sentences to emphasize the perspective of the audience and the “you” view.
To avoid suffering the kinds of monetary losses we have experienced in the past, our credit union prohibits the cashing of third-party checks presented by our members.
To help us process your order with our new database software, we need you to go to this Web site and fill out the customer information required.
We are pleased to announce an arrangement with H-P that allows us to offer discounted computers in the student bookstore.
Under a new policy, reimbursement of travel expenses will be restricted to those related to work only.
We are pleased to announce that you have been approved to enroll in our management trainee program.
I give my permission for you to attend the two-day workshop.
Under separate cover the above-referenced items (printer toner and supplies) are being sent to your Oakdale office, as per your telephone conversation of April 1.
Kindly inform the undersigned whether or not your representative will be making a visitation in the near future
It is recommended that you conceptualize and submit your departmental budget ASAP
BTW, we’ve had some slippage in the schedule but don’t have to scrap everything and start from step zero.
To facilitate ratification of this agreement, your negotiators urge that the membership respond in the affirmative.
Customers are ineligible for the 10 percent discount unless they show their membership cards
Titan Insurance Company will not process any claim not accompanied by documented proof from a physician showing that the injuries were treated.
If you fail to comply with each requirement, you will not receive your $50 rebate.
We must withhold remuneration until you complete the job satisfactorily.
We can’t process your application because you neglected to insert your telephone number.
Construction cannot begin until the building plans are approved.
All employees must return their health care packets by November 1, or they will not be able to change any options.
Any applicant for the position of fireman must submit a medical report signed by his physician.
Every employee is entitled to see his personnel file.
21. All waiters and waitresses are covered under our new benefits package.
22. A salesman would have to use all his skills to sell those condos.
23. All conference participants and their wives are invited to the banquet.
24. How many man hours are required to complete the project?
25. Please ascertain whether we must perpetuate our current contract despite perplexing profits.
26. He hypothesized that the vehicle was not operational because of a malfunctioning gasket.
27. Because we cannot monitor all cash payments, we must terminate the contract
28. The contract stipulates that management must perpetuate the retirement plan.
29. I’ll interface with Mark to access his people.
30. Unilateral nullification of the terms and conditions of the expiring agreement absent bona fide impasse is prohibited.
Essentials of Business Communication
ISBN: 978-1111821227
9th edition
Authors: Mary Ellen Guffey, Dana Loewy