$10\mathrm{.}3$ Document for Analysis: Linkedin Favor Request $($L$.$O$.1-3)$

A student chose Linkedln to request a recommendation from his professor. The following message suffers from many writing faults, including poor tone and flawed persuasive strategy.

YOUR TASK Analyze the Linkedln message and list at least five weaknesses. If your instructor directs, revise the message. Decide whether to use Linkedln, of which the receiver is a member, or an e$-$mail to make this request.

Mike Winter

$2$ people in this conversation

Hey, Prof!! How's it goin? You still travel to South Amrica a lot? You and me talked about Argentina alot because my family is originally from Buenos Aires. You remember me$,$ don't ya$?$ I jus wanted to know would you write a letter of recommendation for me$?$ I$\text{'}$m aplying for the MBA program. I was always helpin you out with distriuting papers and sat upfront. Never missed a class.

Anyhoo, I was wondering if you'd write me a ltter. In case you wonder, I had you in FAll $2019$ for business writting. best class I ever took. Oh$,$ I need it real soon, on Friday this week??

Call me on my cell $2014428559$ or use FB$.$ Thanx, Franco