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Your English (British) Manager wants to send a brief written message welcoming employee recently transferred to your London Head Office from your Japan branch. They all speak English, but your Manager asks you to review her message for clarity. The message is as follows: I wanted to welcome you ASAP to our little family here in Her Majesty's Land. I am chuffed to bits to have you guys although I am gutted that I couldn't go to the airport on time as the roads were absolute choc a. I won't faff about it much as you all must be cream crackered after the long flight. So, let's catch up tomorrow in a meeting after our morning cuppa! Bye guys! Identify five mistakes that your manager has made in this current situation and mentpon the facregt approach