$4\mathrm{.}1$ Radical Rewrite: Information E$-$Mail$$Negative Announcement

The attached wordy, inefficient, and disorganized message invites department managers to three interviewing sessions to select student interns. However, to be effective, this message desperately needs a radical rewrite.

Your Task. Study the message and list at least five weaknesses. Then revise to avoid excessive wordiness and repetition. Also, think about how to develop an upbeat tone and improve readability. Can you condense this sloppy $14-$sentence message into $6$ efficient sentences plus a list$$and still convey all the necessary information?

Upload your edited file with your completed tasks to Dropbox Assignment $2.$