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Highlight each error. Underneath each sentence, revise to remove$/$replace abstract nouns.

Home inspectors presented confirmation of termites in the subfloor.

Due to deterioration of the joint, she will need hip replacement surgery.

My supervisor showed me collection of data for future planning.

The improvement of route processes will lead to less time driving.

Law enforcement officials believe the use of force is sometimes necessary.