Accepting your fear is your chance to find your own life again. In the book Big Magic, Gilbert points out that "fear is a desolate boneyard where our dreams go to desiccate in the hot sun". When we are afraid, we will falter in front of everything, making the dreams and the things we want to do to be prevented. For example, I have a friend who suffers from depression because she cannot get rid of her own fears. At first, she was only afraid of ordinary things such as fear of strangers, fear of small animals, and fear of the dark, but gradually the fear ceased to exist in a small area and it became bigger. She began to fear crowds, fear being judged and judged by others, fear shopping, and fear going out in the street. That's what made her life gradually shrink and sink into loneliness and loss. Such feelings made her not want to live anymore and contemplated suicide several times. Therefore, fear is not as simple as we think, but it will become dangerous if we do not know how to suppress it. I know that fear can't go away completely so let's try to live with it but we will be the ones to take control of the fear instead of letting it take over our lives. I am an example of bravely fighting fear to take my life. I don't look like the girl I mentioned above, used to be very afraid of many things such as snakes, centipedes, darkness, and needles, but later I bravely contained those fears, and my life gradually became more creative. At first, I only suppressed my simple fears, but later on, I began to control bigger debts such as fear of being fired fear of wrong notes, and fear of complaints from customers. When I bravely overcome those fears, my life becomes more creative. I find I can live my own life free from fear.

 

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