Analyze the following e$-$mail to be sent by the vice president to all supervisors and managers. Discuss the tone and writing faults in this message. Revise the e$-$mail so that it reflects some of the writing techniques you learned in this chapter. How can you make this e$-$mail more courteous, positive, concise, precise, and audience$-$oriented? Revise it using Word's Track Changes and Comment features. Use track changes and the balloon feature to show your changes to the email message.