Analyze the problematic e$-$mail. List at least five weaknesses. Pay special attention to its tone. Your instructor may ask you to revise the email so that it reflects some of the writing techniques you learned in this chapter. How can you make this email more courteous, positive, concise, precise, and audience centered? Your instructor may ask you to revise this message as a collaboration project using Google Docs or Word$$s Track Changes and Comment features.

List at least five weaknesses.

Disrespectful tone

Gender bias

Unprofessional

Lack of empathy or sympathy

Hey team,

First I would like to thank everyone for their hard work. The reason you are receiving an email today is that recently I have been made aware of a lawsuit filed against the company by one of our employees about a comment made by a supervisor during a performance evaluation. I would like us all to take measures to help prevent this in the future.

Here are some ways we can work on our company wide evaluations. Feel free to share with all supervisors and managers.

First I$\text{'}$d like to implement a system to measure an employee's performance.