Assignment $1-$ What's Wrong With This Message?

The following e$-$mail message contains several errors that could lead to confusion for the sender$.$ Read through the message and determine what these errors are $($there are $5).$ After you have found the $5$ types of errors, rewrite the email to make it more acceptable.

Scenario$-$ A U$.$S$.$ manager's instructions to a new employee $($Ms$.$ Janet Lee$)$ from an Asian culture.

Hello Mr$.$ Lee,

I don't think we are even in the field here in terms of the sales projections. If we cant get the numbers on track, we will be forced to punt and the competition will be able tomarch down the feld and score. We need a touchdown from you super fast! Do you understand???? Please get to me$,$ like yesterday!!!