ASSIGNMENT 2: Chapter 5 Improving your Writing Style 1) Below is a thank you email from a potential employee to the hiring manager. First, explain why the email is poorly worded and why it lacks style. Is the email clear, concise, and professional enough for an interview follow-up? Explain. If you were the interviewer, what feedback would you give the person who sent the email? Draft a replacement email for the potential employee. Feel free to use some creativity. L2 Sendd B W L Y 2 B B Te: Hiring Manager Frem: Job Candidate Subject: Thank You Thank you for the job interview. | believe that | am qualified. | have extensive experience in the field of finance. | enjoyed speaking with you. | look forward to hearing from you. Regards, Sendd # = W ! = Options v In reaching today's agreement, the State Attorneys General importantly acknowledged our \"good faith and responsible corporate citizenship.\" However, this does not lessen the need for us to learn the lessons and address the challenges that still lie ahead in relation to opioids. Indeed, while our past work with opioid manufacturers was lawful and never intended to do harm, we have always held ourselves to a higher bar. We fell short of that bar. We did not adequately acknowledge the epidemic unfolding in our communities or the terrible impact of opioid misuse and addiction, and for that | am deeply sorry. What helps the reader digest the information? What makes it difficult to understand or focus on the message? Did the examples in the prior email make you realize that your messages may not be as clear as you initially believed? Explain. Why should you reread emails before you send them