C$$u $1$: $(2$i$$m$)$: Indicate mistakes in each sentence and revise it$.$

We were all on top of the world when we could win the contract from

Apple.

You must complete the enclosed questionnaire and then we can

continue to provide you with education funds.

The client needs to be called about the meeting on Thursday and asked

whether the time will work for her.

A man has one small step, one giant leap for mankind.

She saw a puppy and a kitten on the way to the store.

Robert shouted loudly when he saw a little girl was crossing the road on

her own.

Hoping to excuse my lateness, the note was written and given to my

teacher.

I am sending this email to inform you that we will have a camping trip this

weekend.

If you don't change your eating habits, you will not be able to lose weight.

$10.$ We plan to schedule meetings on a monthly basis.