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Strategy and Global Finance TASK 1 A. Understand the Concept of Globalisation Linked to Investment Approaches, Using Examples from Electro-Tech & Other Global Companies 1.1 Analyse the Concept of Globalisation The concept of globalisation escapes precise definition in most cases it is described rather than defined (Zohari, 2020). Globalisation is a system of interaction between people, government, and countries. It notion is to spread business, culture, technologies at international level (Friedman,2000). This concept has made countries partner with each other to permit easy trade. With cross border regulations, political, technological, and cultural factors impeding goods and services around countries, globalisation is yet to be established locally and internationally. There are different types of globalisation which include: social globalisation, technological globalisation, cultural globalisation, economic globalisation, political globalisation, ecological globalisation, sociological globalisation. Globalisation is a powerful instrument that affect capitalist with trade policies creates employment and unemployment in economies. With the world as a global village, it has influenced many companies, people and countries