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OBJECTIVE This assessment is designed to let you demonstrate your mastery of the following outcomes: CC2.1- Distinguish the common selling strategies businesses use to generate revenues online DIRECTIONS Select one of the products below to sell on the web. Research the product and provide a submission on strategies you would use to sell your products, the advantages and disadvantages for selling these items on the web, and strategies you would use to "entice" visitors and turn them into customers. For this assignment, you also have a small "brick and mortar" store Games Automobiles Luxury Watches and Purses (Omega, Rolex, Chanel, Gucci, Louis Vuitton, etc..) 5 CRITERIA Your submission will use the textbox provided. I encourage you to use images, tables, graphs as long as they support your submission. Make sure you CITE your images (Ex: Image courtesy of: www.xxx.com) Two sources supporting your submission Use of 7 chapter terms that are HIGHLIGHTED either by CAP or underline . Module 2 Lesson 1, Assignment Selling ... Watch later Share 1. select product carefully 2. Research your topic 3. Use the criteria to bude submission 4. Provide substantive, yubmission 5. Use the rubric as a "guide" to building your submission On- Watch on Youlube -e ns Submitting your assignment 1. Please complete the assignment based on assignment specifications. 2. Enter the submission title. 3. Choose the location of your file. 4. Navigate to your file and select. 5. Click upload 6 View the originality Report. A paper is not acceptable with a 25% or higher score. For help here is a tutoriale on how to upload as well 2. Enter the submission title. 3. Choose the location of your file. 4. Navigate to your file and select. 5. Click upload. 6. View the Originality Report. A paper is not acceptable with a 25% or higher score. For help here is a tutoriale on how to upload as well The assessment rubric that I will use to assess your work is provided below to assist you in providing a quality s Module 2 Lesson 1 Mastery Assessment rubric J Assignment Dashboard > Module 2 Lesson 1: Mastery Assessment ? Mastery Assignment Module 2-lesson 11 1 So, I have chosen Gucci because it's a very lucrative company. I The marketing channel is a good one and it seems from statistica.com that it sells a lot more leather products than anything else. It is the most well-known-luxury product there is. Their marketing channel is good. My store will be Natasha's Fashions. I My marketing-channel will include all Gucci products and a few others. It will include a personal shopper to attend to the needs of everyone. A virtual-model-will be shown with products and accessories. The stickiness-to-this website will be huge! I will have a web portal-and-a-web-directory to take you wherever you desire. A-bill-presentment service- will show you how to track your spending. Equestrian equipment will be available for special orders also 1 I will have a mail-order and catalogue-order available also to meet everyone's needs. They will have easy order numbers and establish payments Advantages are easy ordering and knowing who your customers will be Ads will pull in many customers along with social media. Ads such as on Facebook will be the most-lucrative way to pull people in Google is also a big place for sales. I Disadvantages are for people who want to see the product in person and touch the product. People who do not trust intemet buying would be a disadvantage. People who do not want their card numbers online would be another disadvantage 11 All in all, I think I would sell a lot of products in my online store. I would have to devote a lot of time to it though and make customers out of friends. I 1 Naldslid, a Your paper is not graded, the comments were general comments that I provided within the message sent a while ago here through Canvas. I've included the information below again. Please review the comments provided. There is so much information that could be elaborated on and added in the submission for this assignment. You mentioned several terms from the Chapter 3 readings and they may have been relevant to what you were discussing in your paper, "the stickiness can be huge." Yet, you did not expand on these much. There is still time for you to include and expand or add more detailed information in your paper. Please consider doing this before Sunday evening. If you would like to meet, I can make myself available now just let me know. Thank you