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Paragraph A. Is repetitive. Maybe insert some things that the UBI can be used for. Are there some countries with UBI already? If so, maybe add what research is saying they were able to put it towards. Was it better housing? Better food? Educational resources?

Paragraph B. More flexible was as opposed to what? Might be good to say what traditional welfare systems tend to offer and how the UBI will allow people to examine their own financial needs and use the additional UBI funds to address their needs on an individual basis.

Paragraph C. Also, with current concerns over inflation, is there info on how the UBI is useful when inflation is high.

Paragraph D. How are traditional welfare system discouraging of risk?

Paragraph E. Highlighted these two to show the repetition. Either rephrase or find a way to expand without saying it twice.

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