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Document Makeover $-$ Routine Message

Activity Description

In this activity, Peter Gibson, the Director of Public Training Programs at Money Sense International, has hired you as his assistant. Greta Hughes is a Communication and Grammar Consultant who has been working with employees to improve overall communication efforts at Money Sehse. Peter is responding to an email from Janna Lawrence and asked for help reviewing the email before hitting the "Send" button. You will work with Greta to improve the document since this is your first time editing Peter's work.

The estimated time to complete the activity is $10$ to $15$ minutes. You should start when you have enough time to critically think through the scenario. However, if you need to exit the activity before completion, you will return to where you left off when you re$-$enter.

Learning Objectives

After completing the activity, you will be able to:

Use editing and proofing skills to improve a workplace message.

Evaluation and Scoring

You will be asked to respond to a variety of questions as you complete the activity, and your responses may impact both your score and what happens next.