Do Analyze and Revise a Poorly Written Message see below

Chapter $4-6$ Team Assignment Part $1$ Plan and Outline your Message

YOU WILL DO THIS AS A TEAM and ONLY ONE PERSON WILL SUBMIT THIS ASSIGNMENT

Start a new Word Document $-$ name it Chapter $4-6$ Team$-$X Assignment Part $1$

List at least $5$ weaknesses based on the information in Chapters $4-6$ in your text book

For each weakness, enter the text in the document that exemplifies the weakness.

For Example "Passive Voice $-$ The test was taken by John"

Outline the revised document

Remember the Letter$-$ Memo$-$ Email Guideline $($Look in Chapter $4$ in the Lecture Section $-$print this and use it as a guideline for ALL assignments$).$

The outline must be $3-$Levels

Submit your Chapter $4-6$ Team$-$X Assignment Part $1$

Only one team member should submit this assignment

If more than one is submitted on the last one will be graded

Document for Analysis: Poor Response to Customer Inquiry About Social Media

To: Blanca Nunez

From: Tor Macinnis

Subject: Hopping on the Social Media Buzz

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