Does the writer of the essay "Who Would Have Thought" (an essay in the module this week) use point by point or whole by whole for her essay? Was this a good decision? Why or why not? Also, what is she comparing and/or contrasting? What is her thesis (give this word for word from the essay.)

Is her essay balanced? Is she comparing or contrasting equal items. For instance, if she mentions she is neat, does she mention whether her friend is neat or messy. If she mentions she is a hard worker, does she mention whether her friend is or is not? The essay needs to be balanced. Does she focus more on one person or the other?

What advice, if any, would you give this writer to make the essay better?

Remember your own post must be 10 sentences and you must respond to at least three other students.

Who Would Have Thought?

You can’t pick who you are friends with or who you love. There is something inside that attracts you to each and every person. Maybe it is the way they look at you, or the things they say. In some cases I think attraction can be a sub-conscience matter that we don’t have control over. I know this first hand. I met Mike in high school. The funny thing is I never really thought much about him. He was the class clown and I was the prissy teacher’s pet who looked down on him. It still seems odd to me that we became as close as we are.

Mike and I are like apples and oranges. Every aspect of us is different, except for our height. I was a cheerleader, president of the choir and a member of the drama club. Mike didn’t belong to any school activities, unless you count detention. For fun my friends and I would go to the movies or to a football game. His friends would put their cars on cruise control and see if they could jump out, run along side, and then jump back in. Mike was in a few of my classes and always made a big point of teasing me about my grades, being in the choir, or my friends. I always acted like I hated him but deep down I enjoyed the attention.

We both graduated L’Anse Creuse and went our separate ways. Mike went to school as far away as he could manage. I stayed home afraid to go too far. Mike never crossed my mind for a whole school year. That summer a friend and I went to pick up a pizza and there he was. It is funny how one year of college can change a person. For the first time in my life I looked at Mike with something other than disgust. I must have stood in that pizza place for two hours

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laughing and flirting with the boy who once dressed up as a woman and came into my work on a dare. Mike asked for my phone number and we planned to get together and watch a movie the next night.

On my way to Mike’s house, I kept thinking of how a relationship with him would never work out. We were too different. Once I saw his room I realized my thinking may have been right. I have never seen so much junk in one place. Every inch of Mike’s walls were covered with posters of rock bands and girls holding a beer in their bikinis. The only thing besides paint on my walls were a few framed pictures of family and friends. I cleaned my room every day and always made sure to make it extra special for company. Mike’s room looked as if he dumped the contents of his dressers and his closet on the floor. Normally, I would have been disgusted by a mess like this but for some reason, I didn’t let it bother me. Mike and I had a great night and started seeing more of each other.

Lately, I don’t think I go more than a day without talking to Mike. When he comes home from school we are inseparable. Once in a while we do get in fights though, being as different as we are there is no way we can avoid them. We fight over what music to listen to in the car more of all. We resolved that one by saying whoever’s car we are in gets to chose. We never take my car anymore. Even though our lives are completely different we share one thing in common, each other. The boy I used to tell on for cheating off of me is now my best friend, and one of the most important people in my life. I couldn’t imagine my life without him. You cant pick who you are friends with or who you love. There is something inside that attracts you to each and every person. I guess the song is right, opposites really do attract.

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