During Units $4$ and $5,$ you worked on creating paragraphs that will be used in your essay for Unit $7.$ Thus far, you have created an introduction with a thesis and two body paragraphs. For the Unit $7$ essay, you will need to add at least one more body paragraph along with a conclusion paragraph. Journals should be six or more sentences.

Look back over your submissions for Units $4$ and $5.$ Carefully review the feedback that was provided to you on each of the assignments. How will you work on revising your work based on that feedback?

What changes do you need to make to strengthen your final draft for Unit $7?$