E-mail Message Draft To: Tracey Nelson [tnelson@marriott.com] Date: November 4, 2021 Subject: (1) I am planning a two-day business writing workshop for professionals. (2) It is my first workshop ever! (3) Therefore, I am writing to request information about meeting rooms at your hotel. (4) Please send this information to me as soon as possible. (5) My workshop will be held on September 26 and 27, 2022. (6) I am planning for 25 participants. (7) A necessary requirement is a U-shaped table setup. (8) Please apprise me of any group discounts or package deals at the Marriott. (9) Can you provide a price list for refreshments? (10) Also, can we rent audiovisual equipment from the hotel? (11) Finally, can you send me information about entertainment options there?

Qustion:

Evaluate the first sentence of the e-mail message draft above. If this is effective, write Correct. If not, create an appropriate first sentence.