Example: 1,2 The original quote below is from a New York Times article about moving and updating a train station: Original Quote "New tracks aside, the challenge is at the bare minimum to bring light and air into this underground purgatory and, beyond that, to create for millions of people a new space worthy of New York, a civic hub in the spirit of the great demolished one, more attuned to the city's aspirations and democratic ideals."- Michael Kimmelman, The New York Times Paraphrased paragraphs: One of the biggest issues facing Penn Station's revitalization is developing a brighter, airier space. It is an abysmal "underground purgatory," and with so many New Yorkers and tourists traveling in and out of its doors every day, should be reconstructed to better reflect the endeavors and passions of the city. (Kimmelman) Besides replacing the railroad tracks, the toughest part is to at least bring air and light to Penn Station. Millions of people in New York are deserving of a new civic hub, constructed in the same essence of the one that was leveled so many years ago. Moving forward with such a development ties in with the city's enthusiasm for beauty and architecture. 7) Read these three paragraphs and write an evaluation of the two paraphrases. a. Was there plagiarism in one, both, or neither? b. Was one a better paraphrase than the other based on the definition of a paraphrase at the top of the page? Explain your answer.