Final Draft: Process Analysis

Assignment: Observe someone who works or practices in the community you chose to write about for this semester, describing and analyzing their process.

Topic; Ethnography to be on people with depression

Guidelines: First, introduce us to who they are and what they do. Then, describe them: their background in this subject, their appearance, their environment. As they are doing an activity (cooking, teaching, playing football, drawing, parenting, caring for patients, etc.) detail what they have done step by step?this is their process. For your final draft, you may include/me/my in areas that indicate your own actions during the observation if you need to.

NOTE: please send me step by step paragraph on depression

Process Analysis Final Draft, Updated Criteria Ratings Pts Intro 1.5 pts 0.75 pts Introduction establishes the subject of the essay in Full Marks Needs Revision an engaging but general opening sentence, names the person you will be observing, how you will be 1.5 pts observing them (title and user name if it is a video) and states what they will be doing. See examples. (1.5 point) Thesis Statement 1 pts 0.5 pts 0 pts Ends with a thesis statement that connects what Full Marks Needs Revision No Marks 1 pts you observed to your analysis paragraph (1 point) Background, Appearance, Environment 3 pts 2 pts 1 pts Include a paragraph of impartial, objective Has all 3 Has 2 Has 1 observation details-al background, bj appearance, 3 pts () environment. (3 points) Lists Steps and/or Interview 2 pt 1 pts List the steps they perform in at least one activity, Has multiple explained steps and/or quotes Needs in chronological order and using transition words to that are explained Revision 2 pts show order in another paragraph (2 points) No Opinions In First 3 Paragraphs 1 pts Opts Keep your opinions out of the first three paragraphs Did it! Didn't Do It 1 pts (1 point) Analysis Paragraph 3 pts 2 pts 1 pts O pts In your final analysis paragraph, use your logic to Analysis Analysis Conclusion No explain how or why the person performs the Looks Needs Paragraph does Marks activity the way that they do. Refer to Online Great Revision not have Analysis Writing 3 for notes on why people develop a process and check out the sample paper I posted 3 pts this week. What do their surroundings contribute to your interpretation?' What does the person's actions say about their connection to the activity or community you chose?' (3 points) Language and Word Choice 3 pts 2 pts 1 pts Use descriptive, accurate word choice that is Language Choice is Could use a Grammar and appropriate for this kind of essay (and is not Appropriate, Paper Proofread, but Punctuation are circuitous!). Review the notes for further is Proofread, Language is Strong But Information. Keep papers free of fragments, Description in 2nd Appropriate Language Choice 3 pts apostrophes, spelling and capitalization errors (3 and 3rd paragraph Needs Revision points) is good Transitions Connecting Aspects of 0.5 pts Opt Process/Interview Full Marks No Marks 0.5 pts Total Points: 15