Fix the parallelism problems in the following paragraph and increase conciseness. In order to get into the program, she will have to take time rehearsing the presentation, train her group, and how to meet her training goals. But in order to reach this milestone, she will have to practice daily, meet with her group every day, and will probably have to be working longer hours at her job. You are a Human Resources manager at Johnson Organics and you wish to communicate to a job candidate. Rewrite the following opening line of your message so that it has a concise and direct approach for a positive message. This is to let you know that we have carefully considered your qualifications and test results and compared them with those of our other job candidates and have concluded that you should be shortlisted for the final interview process for the position of Lead Researcher at Johnson Organics. As an expert in business communication, you realize that the sentences below in the closing of Lester's message is not likely to be effective. Rewrite the sentences so that they are more likely to be effective. I want my money to be returned right away and want you to pay for me to ship this horrible product bought from your website back to you have bought several products from Quality Song in the cast but will not do so again if this matter is not resolve satisfactory Edit the sentence below for conciseness. (You can change and remove words, but be sure not to change the meaning of the sentence.) Yesterday, when internet security experts meet at the IT Securities meeting that is held every year many leaders who lead IT services will find out about the latest programs for improving cyber safety to make their programs better