For some time our management team has been thinking about hiring several interns.We decided to offer compensation to the interns in our internship program because in two fields (computer science and information systems) interns are usually paid, which is the norm. However, you may be disappointed to learn that we can offer only three internships.

In working with our nearby by sate university, we have narrowed the field to six excellent candidates. These six candidates will be interview. This is to inform you that you are invited to attend three interviewing sessions for these students candidates. Your presence is required at these sessions to help avoid making a poor selection.

Mark your calendars for the following three times. The first meeting is May 3 in the conference room. The second meeting is May 5 in office 22 (the conference room as scheduled) . On May 9 we can finish up the conference room. All of the meetings will start at 2 p.m. In view of the fact that your projects need fresh ideas and talented new team members, I should not have to urge you to attend and be well prepared

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