For this assignment, I need help revising this script and making this script grab potential donors' attention and emphasize the importance of the Stroy Wrangler Programs in School and how much it benefits these underprivileged children in the community who do not have access to arts education. It needs to show how passionate we are about our mission! Further, during the close and when I am trying to get a $1,000 donation I need another person's personal opinion, such as yourself of what benefits you find most attractive and you would be excited to donate the 1,000.00! I need to pick at least two or three from each level such as Presale access to shows with premium seating up to the $1000.00 level. I am doing a mock call in front of the class and if I get $1000.00 donation I will get an A. I can't send emails because this is a phone campaign. It has to be over the phone!!!

Please help!

The Script:

Hello, Is this ? My name is Colleen, and I am calling with the PARAMOUNT & STATESIDE THEATRE. How are you today? I am calling for a couple of quick things today. First, I would like to THANK YOU and express our gratitude for being a valued member of our audience family! It means a great deal to us!

I see you recently attended SHOW NAME. What fascinated you most about the performance? We are thrilled you had a great time! (BUILD RAPPORT)

The other reason for my call is that once a year we get the chance to spotlight and let people know about our heartfelt MISSION off-stage. We have several outreach and educational programs that have a significant impact on underprivileged children in the community and we reach tens of thousands of children every year. We are deeply committed and passionate about trying and help every child we can! For example, are you familiar with our Story Wranglers program in schools?

The Paramount Story Wranglers is one of our standout educational programs that transforms kids' lives. We offer this program to 3rd-graders. Were we put professional skilled arts educators in the school for a seven-week residency and they work with the students to learn the foundations of creative writing through arts-integrated lessons that really motivate these children to improve their writing and creativity skills, boost their confidence, and storytelling abilities.

During this time, the children write hundreds of stories, and at the end of seven weeks, our professional actors and educators, The Paramount Story Wranglers, transform these original stories from the page to the stage in a live performance for the entire school and their families. It is truly magical, and I can't tell you how much this impacts these children that would otherwise not have access to such arts education opportunities. It becomes a lifelong memory, and the impact speaks for itself!!! 100 percent of teachers involved in the program say that that it significantly improves students' writing and social-emotional learning, while nearly all the students' express pride in their writing and their expanded vocabulary skills!

It is truly heartwarming to witness the lasting effect this program has on these kids and their families. YOUR UNDERSTANDING OF THE IMPORTANCE OF SUCH PROGRAMS IS TRULY APPRECIATED

Think back to your school days. Did creative programs impact you in any way?

We alone! As a non-profit theatre and we rely on your support to continue these invaluable programs and a beacon of hope for these children. With tickets sales only meeting half our requirements, the success of these program relies heavily on the generosity of our community!Your donation has the power to change these Childrens' lives and make a real lasting difference. In return for your donation, we have created a collection of unbelievable benefits to show our gratitude for your generous gift. I have different levels of benefits and most folks are joining us at the DIRECTORS' LEVEL and the benefits are: EXPLAIN BENFITS Can You support us atthe level today. No! Okay here are the other levels I haveand their amazing benefits are Before we wrap up I need to very you address we have on file

Chorus Level ($120-$249)

• Pre-sale access to shows
• Patron has an opportunity buy their tickets before they go on-sale for the general public, ensuring they don't miss their favorite performances
• Patron will be notified of pre-sale opportunities via email we have on file
• Invitation to annual Member Holiday Party(held at the end of the year)
• Invitation to special member film event(getting the details)
• Invitation to special Member Appreciation Nights during the Summer Classic Film Series(getting the details)
• Paramount decal

Lead Actor ($250-$499)

• 8 passes to any Paramount Classic Film Series Films
• 8 admissions to any Classic Film Series film that is shown during the year
• 4 complimentary drink tickets
• Alcoholic or non beverage tickets
• Paramount Classic Film Series discounts(getting the details)
• Premium Mezzanine seating and one free small popcorn at any series film
• Mezzanine seating is located in the balcony area giving the patron a wide, full view of the stage, from a little higher up than the Orchestra seating. Front mezzanine seats are usually as good as orchestra seats, sometimes better, depending on the show. It offers a broader view of the stage with clear sightlines, as audiences are situated above the orchestra section. From this vantage point, patrons can see the full sweep of a grand musical/performance without having to look up at the stage for extended periods
• Acknowledgement on the Paramount & State Theatre's web donor listing for a year
• Patron first and last name listed on the website as a current donor. Information is based on lead contact name(s) on the patron account, unless specified they want to remain anonymous. *Example: If only the husband is on the Kaos account, he will be the only one listed and vice versa-Make sure you add husband/wife/partner to the account if necessary

Stage Manager ($500-$999)

• Access toMember Cocktail Hours for designated shows
• These are a pre-show reception (for select shows listed below) with complimentary refreshments and mingling with our incredible community of supporters in theHoudini Lounge, located on the second floor
• 2/20-(Gypsy Kings) 2/24-(Ira Glass) 3/1-(Mark Normand) 3/19-(Pink Martini) 3/22-(David Spade) 3/25-(Herb Alpert) & (Lani Hall) 4/2-(Neko Case) 4/5-(Eric Johnson Band) 4/6-(John Fullbright) & (Bruce Robison) 4/9-(Herbie Hancock) 5/3-(Nimesh Patel) 5/17-(Michelle Wolf)
• Access to Members Only entrance
• Private entrance for members before select shows- skip the crowd/lines

Director *Best Value* (1k-$2499)

• Ticket concierge service, including prime member seating and pre-sale access
• Patron is assigned to a specific Ticket Concierge for the year. They will have a direct number to call and buy tickets for shows and answer any questions the patron may have- focus on convenience here! They will help patrons get the best tickets/seating/prices for all of their favorite shows
• Patrons MUST buy tickets through their concierge in order to get the free parking pass for the specific show. If a patron buys a ticket online or through the box office, free parking will NOT be applied-TELL PATRON THIS IF THEY SAY 'YES' TO THIS LEVEL OR ABOVE
• Patron will be notified via email to purchase tickets for shows before the general public has a chance to buy them- then patrons call their Ticket Concierge to buy tickets
• Free Admission for two to all classic films for a year - includes any Paramount Classic Film Series films!
• Admission for 2 for all Classic Films for 12 months
• List of films will be announced shortly(May-September)
• Complimentary parking for all shows
• The parking garage entrance ison 7th Street, between Congress Ave and Colorado Street
• Patron will receive an email PDF parking pass for designated show and date when they buy their ticket with their ticketing concierge (CLARA)
• Show PDF to valet to exit the parking garage
• 8 drink vouchers
• Alcoholic or non beverage tickets
• Upgrade to Opera Box seating, pending availability
• Patron must contact their Ticket Concierge for purchase and availability
• Invitation to special events, including an annual donor party with access to backstage tours(getting the details)
• Backstage tour takes you on a behind the scenes look at the historic theatre, which the general public rarely sees.
• Invitations to events are sent to patron via email throughout the year

Producer ($2500-$4999)

• Membership in the Advisory Council with special invitation to annual party with celebrity guest
• The Advisory Council is comprised of partners, sponsors and advocates of the historic theatre
• 12 month membership (1 year from date of donation)
• Patron has a chance to attend meetings, ask questions, provide information or recommendations and voice their opinion on any improvements for the theater, but does not engage in any decisions-making
• Patron has a great opportunity for networking and building relationships
• Advisory Council Party was January 17, 2024, Cary Elwes was the celebrity guest at the party. Patron will attend the party in 2025 (date TBD)
• Two complimentary tickets to an Antone's show of your choice
• Patron must call their Ticketing Concierge to book tickets/more information
• Antone's is an iconic Blues Venue in downtown Austin-"Home of the Blues"
• 305 E 5th St, Austin, TX/Street or Valet parking available
• Name recognition on Paramount Theatre lobby mirrors
• Patron first and last name (as shows in Kaos) will be showcased on the donor list located on the HUGE mirrors in the first floor lobby, right as you enter the venue for all to see, unless patron specifies they'd like to remain anonymous
• Upgrade to Opera Box seating, pending availability
• Patron must contact their Ticket Concierge for purchase and availability
• Limited edition Paramount souvenir items

If you donate $250.00 or more today you will receive two complimentary tickets for some amazing shows I have available.