For this assignment, I need to make this script the best it can be! I think that a few things could be changed. I need help revising the script. I would appreciate two versions. Please help! I need it to be the best it could be! I do need it by 2:00 p.m. Eastern time! Thank you!

Sript that needs to be revised.

Hello, is this [Recipient's Name]? My name is Mary, and I'm calling from the PARAMOUNT & STATESIDE THEATRE. How are you doing this morning/afternoon/evening? I am just calling for a couple of quick things. First, I want to thank you for being a valued member of our audience family. Your presence at our performances and shows means everything to us!

I noticed that you joined us for SHOW NAME. May I ask you what was your favorite part of the show? We're thrilled to hear that you had a wonderful time!

The Paramount holds so much history and it is truly a magical experience for all generations! Don't you agree?

The Paramount is such a staple to Austin! Paramount opened its doors on October 11, 1915, and it is incredible to think back at all the Paramount has seen and been through. In fact, in 1916 the world-famous Harry Houdini performed 8 shows at the Paramount where 5 students from The University of Texas challenged him to escape from a trick of their construction and he did!! His legacy lives on where you can see a carved hole just to the left of Saint Cecilia. This is where he performed a suspended levitation trick. (Question to the patron: Did you get a look at it last time youwere out?) The Paramount has soooo much history to it and we do so much to preserve it in its original state to this day."

The main reason for my call today is that every year, we get the opportunity to share a little bit about the incredible work we are doing off the stage. We have several outreach and educational programs that have a significant impact on underprivileged children in our community. Our goal is to reach as many less fortunate children and families as we can every year and make a lasting impact in their lives. Are you familiar with any of our outreach and educational programs? We have the Paramount Summer Camps that offers a scholarship, Field Trips, Songwriting Workshops, but the

one that I am most passionate about is The Paramount Story Wranglers. We bring in professional arts educators who work directly with students for a seven-week residency, teaching them the fundamentals of creative writing through arts-integrated lessons. These lessons truly motivate the children to enhance their writing and vocabulary skills, boost their confidence, and help them find their unique voices!

Then during this program, the children write several stories and at the end of the seven weeks, our professionalactors, and educators, known as The Paramount Story Wranglers, bring these original stories to the stage in a breathtaking live performance for the entire school and their families. It's truly unbelievable the impact it has on these children, who would not otherwise have access to such arts education opportunities. It becomes a lifelong memory, and the results really speak for themselves! In fact, 100 percent of teachers involved in the program have observed significant improvements in students' writing and social-emotional growth, while nearly all the students' express pride in their writing and expanded vocabulary skills.

When you were in school, did you participate in any artistic programs? Do you feel that it impacted you in any way? Wouldn't you agree that arts education is important for a child's development?

I appreciate your understanding of the importance of such programs.

We are a non-profit theatre and ticket sales barely cover half of our annual operating budget and we do rely on the generosity of our community to continue offering life-changing programs like the Paramount Story Wranglers! Your contribution today would make a lasting difference in the lives of these underprivileged children, empowering them to explore their creativity and unlock their full potential. In return for your support, we have created a collection of excellent benefits for our donors.

I have various levels of giving with such amazing benefits, and every contribution will have a meaningful impact. Your generosity will help us continue transforming the lives of these children in our community, and no matter the size, it will have a meaningful impact.

Thank you for considering supporting our cause. Your generosity will make a lasting impact on arts and education in our community.