From: Mandy Summers, Production Manager

Sent: October 8, 2021 12:18 PM

To: Production Staff

Subject: New Equipment for Sweet Creations Inc. Effective October28


(1) Our production staff at Sweet Creations will begin using newcandy manufacturing
equipment on October 28.

(2) Technicians from the Candy Solutions company will install theCandyMaker 650 during the
week of October 14. (3) This new candy production machine usesrobotic features and will save
much time for our company.

(4) The CandyMaker also provides all of the important essentialsfor safety. (5) Unfortunately,
our previous equipment has caused frequent injuries to ouremployees. (6) Therefore, we are
sure that you will appreciate this upgrade.

(7) A staff orientation with the new machine will be held onFriday, October 25 from 12 to 1 pm.
(8) We will congregate in Production Room B, the site of theCandyMaker 650. (9) There, you
will learn about this new machine from Hector Galvez, arepresentative for Candy Solutions.
(10) After the meeting, there will be pizza available for allattendees.

(11) I look forward to seeing everyone at the meeting!

Mandy Summers

1. What is the style problem in Sentence 7? Rewrite thesentence effectively.

2. Which sentence uses passive voice? Rewrite the sentenceeffectively.

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