Hello Lynn

| like your choice for statement. | recently went from a job that was working me 7 days a week, to one that works me only 4. | do end up working 11 hours a days minus an hour lunch for a total of 10 payable hours each day. It is a lot less stress on me both physically and mentally. | would like to see how you present your research into your final project. | would suggest going with three points, by injecting your challenges and considerations as extra talking points into your other three, as it would be part of them already:. Hi Morgan, Really enjoyed reading your post. Not many people talk about this issue, but it definitely needs to be addressed. | think you did a good job on your thesis statement. The issue of Mental health is on the rise post Covid-19, and | also think the government should reform its current polices and implement new ones. Your key point of increasing access to mental health services, implementing school- based support programs, and funding public awareness campaigns support your main topic well. The only objection | could foresee is for this topic is whether there were mental health issues before the covid-19 epidemic in that case you would have an argument against it. Overall, | think you did a really great job with your outline your thesis was solid, all your key points backed your topic, your objections were thought-out, and all your evidence backed those key points and made sense