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Rewrite the following flawed memo. Its tone is too negative and commanding, regardless of the audience. Soften the tone to achieve better audience involvement and motivation. To: Staff Subject: fourth quarter goals Due to a severe lack of discipline, the company failed to meet third quarter goals. To avoid repeating this disaster for the fourth quarter, this is what I think you all must do- ASAP. 1. Demand that the sales department increase cold calls by 15 percent. 2. Require weekly progress reports by all sales staff. 3. Penalize employees when reports are not provided on time. 4. tell managers to keep on top of their staff, pushing them to meet these goals. Remember, when one link is weak in the chain, the entire company suffers. DON'T BE THE WEAK LINK! Your memo will be evaluated based on the content, organization, and mechanics. Make certain your memo is not only well organized and structured, but also grammatically correct, free of errors in mechanics, grammar usage, and spelling