I. FUSED SENTENCE AND COMMA SPLICE ERRORS: The following groups of words contain comma splice and fused sentence errors. Above the incorrect sentence, indicate by labelling it with the correct initials the nature of the error (comma splice write CS or fused sentence write FS), and then write a correctly revised version of the sentence in the space provided, using a variety of techniques and sentence structures.

9. During their summer vacations, my sister and her husband enjoy taking canoe trips in Northern Ontario they have recently started taking their three children with them on some of the easier routes.

10. After paying for a busking license, Emily spent one summer earning money entirely by playing her saxophone at various transit stations, she could frequently make $200-$300 for just an afternoons work.