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COMM2800 Final Paper (1) Criteria Intro Introduction Quality Application of Readings How well five readings were incorporated Evidence and Analysis How well scenes, quotes, and info from the film is used and applied Structure Written structure of the essay Style Writing style of the essay APA Correct use of APA Length Ratings Pts 20to >16.0 pts 16 to >12.0 pts 12 to >8.0 pts. 8 to >0 pts Excellent Good Fair Poor Clearly introduces the chosen film. Clearly states the Introduces the chosen film, the purpose, and relevance | The chosen film, the purpose, and relevance of the essay | The chosen film, the purpose, 20 pts purpose and relevance of the essay. Provides a strong thesis of the essay, but lacks a strong thesis statement that could be more clear, and lacks a strong thesis statement relevance of the essay, and/or thesis statement that highlights the focus of the analysis. highlights the focus of the analysis. that highlights the focus of the analysis. statement are missing or unclear. 50 to >40.0 pts 40 to >30.0 pts 30to >20.0 pts 20to >0 pts Excellent Good Fair Poor Thoroughly analyzes and applies relevant concepts from at Analyzes and applies relevant concepts from at least Analyzes and applies some relevant Analyzes and applies few relevant concepts from fewer 50 pts least five readings. Provides deep insights and connections five readings. Provides insightful connections between | concepts from at least five readings. But than five readings. Connections between the film and between the film and performance studies. the film and performance studies. limited connections. performance studies are weak or missing. 50 to >40.0 pts 40 to >30.0 pts 30 to >20.0 pts 20to >0 pts Excellent Good Fair Poor Extensive evidence from the chosen film, including specific | Sufficient evidence from the chosen film, including Limited evidence from the film to support the Minimal or no evidence from the chosen film scenes, quotes, and details, to support the application of scenes, quotes, and info, to support the application of application of performance studies concepts. to support the application of performance 50 pts performance studies concepts. Sophisticated analysis and performance studies concepts. Good analysis and Analysis and interpretation of the evidence are studies concepts. Analysis and interpretation interpretation of the evidence. interpretation of the evidence. surface-level or inconsistent. are missing or inadequate. 20to >16.0 pts 16 to >12.0 pts 12to >8.0 pts 8to>0pts Excellent Good Fair Poor Clear and logical structure with an intro, body, and conclusion. Clear structure with an intro, body, and conclusion. Somewhat clear structure, but some sections lack Lacks a clear structure or missing 20 pts Well-developed sections. Transitions between sections are Transitions between sections are generally smooth. clarity/organization. Transitions are weak. sections. Transitions abrupt or smooth. unclear. 20to >16.0 pts 16 to >12.0 pts 12to >8.0 pts 8to >0 pts Excellent Good Fair Poor Clear, coherent, and sophisticated writing. Appropriate academic | Clarity and coherence. Uses mostly appropriate Some clarity and coherence. Uses academic Lacks clarity and coherence. Language 20 pts language and maintains a consistent voice throughout. Grammar, | academic language and a consistent voice. Minor language but lacks consistency. Some grammar, is unclear, informal, or inappropriate. punctuation, and spelling are flawless. grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes. punctuation, and spelling errors. Several mistakes. 20to >16.0 pts 16 to >12.0 pts 12 to >8.0 pts 8t0>0pts Excellent Good Fair Poor Accurately and consistently applies APA citation style for Generally applies APA citation style with minor Inconsistently applies APA citation style with Does not apply APA citation style or applies it 20 pts in-text citations and references. errors or inconsistencies. noticeable errors or inconsistencies. incorrectly and inconsistently. 20 pts 0 pts Excellent Poor 20 pts Greater than the 2500 word mimimum Under the 2500 word minimum Total Points: 200