Identify 3 things (3 different types of errors, i.e, not all 3 can be spelling errors) that are wrong with this cover letter and explain how they could be improved.

Assume parts that are not shown at the top and bottom, such as address, date, letterhead, are included in the letter. You are analyzing the components provided below.

Application for full-time Feature Writer with Sports Magazine (publishing company).

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Hi Jim,

So sorry dude, I just found your email today in my spam folder. I did say I want to be a "full-time feature writer" someday, but at the moment, considering I'm still new to the world of professional journalism, I'm just looking for a paid job in journalism that I believe I could do well--I'm not too picky. I am, however, an excellent headline writer--for both space and style--and I'm very comfortable editing, copy editing, and designing.

Would you be free at all to talk or meet sometime this week? Please let me know.

Thanks very much,

Jason Wong

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