Identify the errors in the following message, and consider how best to correct them.

To: DeShawn Davis

From: Peter Schmidt

Date: 13:45, March 31

Subject: Sales Correspondence

Dear Mr. Davis,

[1] Thank you for contacting Ego Building Associates. Ego personell take great pride in providing the most prompt, reliable service in building maintainence and repair.

[2] We often have difficulty finding subcontractors with sufficeint experience to insure our excellant standards are upheld.

[3] Please send us your catalog of garaunteed stucco services. Perhaps our companies will have the opportunity to work together in the future.

Regards,

Peter Schmidt, Project Manager

Ego Building Associates

Which of the following choices is the best revision of Paragraph 1?

1. Thank you for contacting Ego Building Associates. Ego personelle take great pride in providing the most prompt, reliable service in building maintenance and repair.

2. Thank you for contacting Ego Building Associates. Ego personnel take great pride in providing the most prompt, reliable service in building maintenance and repair.

Which of the following choices is the best revision of Paragraph 2?

1. As we are located in the Arizona dessert, where stucco finish is popular, our staff recieves many work orders to repair stucco after tennants have relocated.

2. As we are located in the Arizona desert, where stucco finish is popular, our staff receives many work orders to repair stucco after tenants have relocated.

Which of the following choices is the best revision of Paragraph 3?

1. Please send us your cataloge of stucco services and finishes. Perhaps our companies will have the oppertunity to work together in the future.

2. Please send us your catalog of stucco services and finishes. Perhaps our companies will have the opportunity to work together in the future.