Identify the punctuation errors in the following sentences, and consider how best to revise them.

Will you please send me the $13$ sales projections once you finish entering the data?

Which of the following choices is the best revision of the previous sentence?

Will you please send me the $13$ sales projections once you finish entering the data.

Will you please send me the $13$ sale$$s projections once you finish entering the data.

Will you please send me the $13$s sales projections once you finish entering the data.

The consultant recommended that she read an article titles Opening Your Mind to Change.

Which of the following choices is the best revision of the previous sentence?

The consultant recommended that she read an article titled: Opening Your Mind to Change.

The consultant recommended that she read an article titled $$Opening Your Mind to Change.$$

Its his book from $83,$ when he was in second grade.

Which of the following choices is the best revision of the previous sentence?

Its his book from $1983,$ when he was in second grade.

It$$s his book from $83,$ when he was in second grade.

It$$s his book from $83,$ when he was in second grade.