II. FEEDBACK (5%)

Write ONE-PARAGRAPH FEEDBACK to the interviewee in the following job interview.

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UNDERSTAND THE ASSESSMENT CRITERIA TO GET YOU GET THE SCORE YOU WANT:

CONTENT (5%): Showcase the understanding by:

• Name the point of knowledge (I)
• Explain what it is and its application in business communication (I)
• Give your own reflection on this knowledge point. (I)
• Tell what is good or not good about the interviewee's answer (II)

COHERENCE & UNITY (3%):

• Express a single idea with a clear topic sentence.
• Use the body of the paragraph to demonstrate or expand the topic sentence.
• Restate the main idea in the concluding sentence.

MECHANICS (2%):

• Punctuation (commas, periods, semicolons, etc.)
• Sentence variety and structures (Avoided run-on sentences, comma splices, fragments)
• Cohesive devices (Conjunctions, pronoun references, adverbials)
• Articles
• Verbs
• Words missing/added/order
• Lexical word choice, naturalness of expression, spelling
• Other grammar points (e.g., prepositions, word order, capitalization, etc.)