In response, reflect on this revised statement. Describe the ways it shows the complexity of the event, and provide a suggestion for how they can further develop the statement or the supporting examples.

Thesis: In 1971 Alaska native claims settlement promised to Natives to set up a successful help people and state. Initially, the Alaskan Natives turned the ANCSN (The Alaska Native Regional Crop.) in their favor. This had earnings of $710 mullion between all the Native Corporations. The formation of the Alaska Native Regional Corporation and the Native Corporation system could have been managed in a better way. Most of the Alaskan Natives were poor and uneducated. If there had been some guidance in the early years this would have been beneficial because they had $450 mullion, and sixteen mullion acres also had twenty-sox million acres thrown upon them to manage all by themselves knowing they had no formal education or money management of even economic background. If they had previous guidance, as a group they lost 380 million dollars. The regional and village corporations were brought on by the mismanagement and distrustful business practices. By their earlier mistakes, the Native Corporation turned the ANCSA around. They were able to have better returns by dealing with the larger national and global economy. This helped by getting rid of any bad businesses and then expanding their operations outside of Alaska. They were hoping to earn 710 million dollars 1n 6 years to start something great for the Native Corporation of Alaska The passage of ANCSA never happened if they had never found o1l in Prudhoe Bay in Alaska by the Atlantic, Richfield Co. This passage of the Alaska Organic Act in 1884 said the Alaska Natives' right to use and live on their ancestral land was protected by who owned the land, but this was never officially settled, ANCSA was created so the o1l companies could come 1n and have a clear title so when it came to their land. They needed a way to create so the U.S. government could get what it wanted by dnlling for o1l and pipeline to Valdez on Native-used land and would not make them feel bad 1n the eyes of the lower forty-eight