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From: H & M Calgary
To: Betty Crandall
Subject: Missing Dress Size
Date: December 20, 2018
Dear Customer,
We have your purchase of recent date sent to our Online Sales Department. Owing to the fact that you neglected to include the size of the dress you ordered, please be advised that no shipment of your order was made, but the aforementioned shipment will occur at such time as we are in receipt of the aforementioned information.
H & M
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ISBN: 9781285586618
31st Edition
Authors: Gerald E. Whittenburg, Martha Altus Buller, Steven L Gill
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