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Dear Megan Williams, MS-HRM:

I hope this message finds you well. My name is Michael Mitchell, and I am the new Graduate Recruiter for Rogers State University's MBA programs. Our programs are dedicated to developing the next generation of leaders in business, and I am reaching out to explore potential collaborations between NRG Energy and our academic offerings.

We believe that there are substantial synergies between NRG Energy's industry leadership and our commitment to academic excellence. By partnering with our institution, NRG Energy could benefit from unparalleled access to a diverse pool of highly qualified graduate students and alumni. Our specialization areas include Accounting, Business Analytics, and Management within our MBA programs, which can complement your recruitment and internship strategies.

Would you be open to a brief call or meeting sometime this week to discuss how we might tailor a partnership that aligns with your strategic goals? I would be thrilled to provide more details about our programs and explore potential areas of collaboration that could be mutually beneficial.

Thank you for considering this opportunity. I am eager to discuss the possibility of working together. Please feel free to reach out to me at m..l@rsu.edu or 918-343-7603. You may also reach me outside of the office via my cell at 918-949-7305.

Best regards,

Michael