I've really wanted a new laptop for a while now. My computer is kind of slow and clunky. Sometimes it is difficult to retrieve client information in a timely manner. A new laptop would look great sitting on my new desk. I don't think you should ignore my request because if I don't get what I need, I won't be able to do my job well. My poor performance will look bad for you as my supervisor.

I've researched different laptops and have decided on the one I$\text{'}$d like; it is within the technology upgrade budget allocations. There are other options that would be much cheaper, but they aren't worth mentioning. I've included the link for your assistant to order my new laptop.

Thanks for considering my request. You really are a great guy to work for.

Regards,

Frances

hat suggestion would you give to Frances to make her message more persuasive?

Exercise better judgment by assuming a more demanding tone.

Summarize the problem in a way that highlights relevant issues.

Provide a more detailed explanation of what the computer should look like.