Mark scheme:

Question Number Mark Part 4 Part 4 is marked out of 10, using the two grids below. 10 Mark Communication, content and organisation (AO2a/AO2b) 0 No rewardable material. 1-2 Candidates have referred to at least one bullet point. Task completed to a limited extent, with little development of the bullets provided. Little awareness of audience evident in uses of tone and register. Organisation is limited with little effective use of cohesive devices, paragraphing and punctuation. 3-4 Candidates have referred to at least two bullet points. Task completed to some extent, with some development of the bullets provided. Some awareness of audience evident in uses of tone and register. Organisation is adequate with some effective use of cohesive devices, paragraphing and punctuation. 5 Candidates have referred to all three bullet points. Task completed mostly successfully, with effective development of the bullets provided. Secure awareness of audience evident in uses of tone and register. Organisation is consistent with effective use of cohesive devices, paragraphing and punctuation. Mark Range and accuracy (AO2a/AO2c) 0 No rewardable material. 1-2 Range of vocabulary is limited. Range of appropriate structures is limited. The writing is generally inaccurate and errors cause confusion. 3-4 Range of vocabulary is appropriate for some of the response. Some range of appropriate structures. The writing is accurate for some of the response and any errors generally do not impact on meaning. 5 Range of vocabulary is appropriate for most of the response. Range of appropriate structures, although there may be some lapses. The writing is accurate for most of the response and there are very few errors.

Question:

In your email you must: tell your friend about the new fitness centre explain why you want to join the new fitness centre ask your friend if they want to join the fitness centre with you.

Response:

Hey John,

Hope the heard the good news, nutrilife just opened a brand new fitness centre at the local mall. I header its their biggest fitness centre yet with a variety of machines. You might ask you self even the local gym has those machine well you know one thing the local gym does not have. A Sauna. Yea you heard right along with a large selection of workout machines there is also a sauna my family pack offer unlimited use of it so I wondered if you want to join me and we could split the price of the membership. Let me know soon.

Sincerely,

Tom